Rain

• Artist: Xmask
• Description: This is a haiku a jappanse poem useing 5 syables for the first line 7 for the 2 and 5 for the 3 reak easy.
• Date: 07/15/2008
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The rain gives love to
the world with a great power
to reborn the day

Comments

[Mr Botty]

Good idea E d i b l e F l o w e r. I was about to say the same thing.

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

Your usage word "reborn" made me falter, I'd suggest replacing it with "renew". Aside from that, its very lovely and conveys a strong message [which is difficult to do when you have so little to work with ^ ^'] So, kudos.