Color Me

• Artist: Retroactive N e r d
• Description: This is a poem i wrote over a year ago. I personally like it and just want to know if there is anything i can do to make it better.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: beauty

Color me beautiful
Color me plain
Do what you want
Its all the same

Color me happy
Color me sad
Color me ugly
It won’t make me mad

Color me dainty
Color me sweet
Color me loved
It doesn’t matter to me

For I love you deeply
I love you strong
And in the end
We belong

Color me worthy
Color me kind
Color me Beautiful
One more time

I want to be happy
I want to be loved
I want to feel
Your grace from above

Color me anything
Just please not me
For all I want
Is to be happy

Comments

[XxXxBURNXxXx]

ummm not really anyroom for improvment and i get it when you say that your probably not happy with yourself which is bad i guess haha jusjokes

[Akane_Reicheru]

its really cool your perspective is different... i like it

[Teh Rock Queen]

oh

[Candy_fanatick_SAM101]

I think its really nice^^