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"Race you", called Alice as Natalie and Alice ran around the mailbox and our drive. Those girls were always racing- Alice is an 8 year old and Natalie is 7. They are best friends and I bet the always will. All of a sudden, I hear crying, I zip my way toward the two. They collided...
I ran inside, as fast as I could calling "Mom, Mom!" I raced I zipped speedy quick. I got there, I got to mom's study finally. "Mom?"
"Yes, Purry", Mom said. My name was Pursia, and EVERYONE calls me Purry.
"Natalie, and Alice-"
"Collided?"
"Yes, again" So, mom ran outside with ice and bandaids. I went into my room to ee my collection of butterflys, I've always loved them. And I had a pet caterpiller, and a butterfly.
Next week, I signed up for high school... Then, my bff's Katie and Lily came over because I wouldn't go to the same school. We talked about boys, did our hair and then we went to bed. I'll alway reamember that summer.
End of My Prolouge...
- by RaInBoW_dAnCa |
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- | Submitted on 05/03/2009 |
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- Title: The Butterfly, Prolouge
- Artist: RaInBoW_dAnCa
- Description: Tell me if it's any good me and my friend are making stories and this is mine-
- Date: 05/03/2009
- Tags: butterfly prolouge
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Comments (3 Comments)
- glowy5152 - 05/06/2009
- It's awesome! But what ellen said talk more about Purry nd it will be a 5!
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- Xx_moonlit-night_xX - 05/03/2009
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u missed the s in "see my collection of butterflies.
i think you need to talk more about purry in this story. go into more depth about what katie lilly and purry talked about
ill give this a 4/5
loved it
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- RaInBoW_dAnCa - 05/03/2009
- Please tell me what you think and what I need to make it better? Take anything out, you decide?!
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