- "And they are closing down to the Wire with Midnight Light leading; But Sunnyday is closing in. Let me tell you folks this will be a close race. Wait! South Updrift is catching up fast. Come on South Updrift!" The Announcer shouted! "Come on South Updrift!" Sandy smacked her horse with her riding croup to make her pass the other horses in her way. "South Updrift is neck and neck with Midnight Light! It's a photo finish anddddd... South Updrift wins!"
- Title: Going For The Gold
- Artist: Pyantom
It's a 5 long chapter story of a girl who want's to win in Thoroughbred Racing. But her racing day's are long way from her hands. The main character is Sandy Hasho(made the last name up).
With her friends Katie, Mike, Rico, and Carly they'll help her protect South Updrift(Sandy's Thorughbred)
you can still comment on the first paragraph
- Date: 01/16/2009
- Tags: night
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- babybear000 - 02/24/2009
- ...u give alot of detail in ur summary but, theres not much 2 go by in the 1st paragraph. it sounds like a good mid section but, not the greatest 4 the opening. ur trying and thats good
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