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Life
Life is not a little thing that can be thrown away and forgotten. Life is something that should be cherished and loved till the end. A gift, a friend, the best thing known to you. Now, I know that those of you reading this are thinking, "What does she know?" but, think about it, and you'll realize that what I'm saying is correct and that you should all make the best of your life while you can instead of sitting in front of your computer all day like there's no tomorrow. So get up and do something with your life! Dance, jog, walk, play, have fun! Just do something. So at that, I shall bid you all farewell and tell to you this advice, Live Life as it Should Be!
Sincerely,
omg404
Live, Laugh, Love
- Title: Life
- Artist: omg404
- Description: okay so, I was bored and I started writing this random thing about life on my whiteboard and, BANG! I came up with this! Enjoy and please comment!
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: life
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Aimeegurl1795 - 01/31/2009
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ur..."story" is two things:
1) very well written and professional
2) very boring and full of s**t
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- Svulkaine - 10/14/2008
- ^.^ entirely useful advice.
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- Beth Turner - 10/14/2008
- Well Moosh, a huge percent of the American population IS, in fact, over-weight and/or lazy. Therefore, this is perfectly relevant, at least to 300 million people in the north-western hemisphere. I like the initiative you put into this work. So then, did you follow your own advice omg404?
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- Puckeffideb - 10/14/2008
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well it's kinda hard to go outside when your SICK!!!!
I have been sick for a month now, and my asthma is reacting to my cold and stomachy thingie...
But when I am not sick, I go outside everyday, and to be exact I am busy EVERY day, and half of it is to do with sports, and then the rest with instruments...
But otherwise, You write beautiful things! - Report As Spam
- Jestur - 10/13/2008
- p_p luv u 404
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- Moosh123 - 10/13/2008
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It sounds more like this should be in the poem and lyric section instead of the non-fiction section. But it's good!
It's cool that you believe in making the most of your life while you have it. But you're making it sound like a huge majority of the population of the world is over-weight or lazy. And personally, I think I'm doing pretty well. razz
Good writing and keep it up!! - Report As Spam
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