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  • Title: Hermosa sonida
  • Artist: Brooklyn Hyuuga
  • Description: Gently she glided over to the piano, perfectly manicured nails dancing across polished keys. You inquired curiously if she knew how to play and her answer was like a pixie like smile. Softly, a tune began rising from the baby grand and before you knew it a crowd had manifested around you. Ending on a high note, she caught your eyes as the crowd began to clap.

    "Does that answer your question?"

    (I had to use google translate for the title lol)
  • Date: 06/01/2020
  • Tags: piano music elegance
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  • MalevoIence - 06/10/2020
  • The smile is already "like the smile of a pixie."
    It cannot be "like the smile of a pixie like the smile of a pixie."
    Thus, "You inquired [...] and her answer was a pixie-like smile.
    Also, inquired already implies curiosity. The adverb is wordy. 5/5 avi tho
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