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  • Title: AG2011: Geisha Assassin
  • Artist: Kimiko Doll
  • Description: "Geisha Assassin" Poem was removed due to a cruel person from Facebook stealing my poem, entered it into a contest and not giving me credit or asking me for my permission. All of my poems have been saved and moved elsewhere for my protection. It is not nice to steal what someone worked hard on for your own gain. If you were in my shoes and I did that to you, I guarantee you would not like me.
  • Date: 01/17/2011
  • Tags: ag2011
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Fuji_hobo_jacket - 02/02/2011
  • I like the avatar for the most part. The eyes bug me a little bit because they look more pink that the other reds. Maybe the red eyes from whichever oculus was the earlier released one?

    As for the description, I like that you used a poem to describe, but a lot of the rhythm and rhyming felt forced no matter how I read it. Also, you're talking about a geisha, maybe you could've done haiku's. xD
  • Pikachew - 01/31/2011
  • The flowers add an unfitting texture and the hidden ace on your chest feels a bit gimmicky. The theme is great. Overall it's nice knowing that red, white and black can be put to good use without making a demon or half baked matching avatar.
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