- by XxMidnightxBloodxLustxX |
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- | Submitted on 12/03/2010 |
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- Title: Pretty Little Housekeeper
- Artist: XxMidnightxBloodxLustxX
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Description:
There was a pretty little house keeper who was slacking off on her job,
She was listening to the latest heartthrob,
Pretty little housekeeper dusted all over the house,
Pretty little housekeeper was scared by a mouse,
Pretty little housekeeper bumped the fruit cake,
Pretty little housekeeper looked at what a mess she could make,
and up went the cake, on top of her head,
all because of a mouse,
the next time she saw her clients she was dead.
~yush, i wrote dat~
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~MBL - Date: 12/03/2010
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Comments (5 Comments)
- XxMidnightxBloodxLustxX - 12/10/2010
- tanks kasen! it was my first entry, so.... well, bai!
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- i-Kiichigo-i - 12/10/2010
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D: Ramona, that was harsh. Say something positive in the comments if you're willing to rate it more than 1 star.
I think it's quite good, but yes, it does need some work. You should try to maybe make it a bit better with a bit more reason. I'm just saying... 3 rounded to 4/5 - Report As Spam
- XxMidnightxBloodxLustxX - 12/09/2010
- uhm ramona, as harsh as that was, i did need some constructive criticsm, so, thanks, and ill work harder, and goldilocks, thanks!
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- HazyKoala - 12/07/2010
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It could be a nice avatar, but there's so much cluttered.
Is that cake on your head? Or just clutter? The panda is randomly just there, with no purpose. The ears and nose also are unfitting. Lastly, the pink hair is irking me. This could be very nice if you stuck to the shoes/dress and a black/white/red colour theme. 2/5 - Report As Spam
- stupidtwit - 12/06/2010
- 5/5!!! smile
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