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- | Submitted on 10/24/2010 |
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- Title: Broken warrior
- Artist: The-Edge-of-Time
- Description: couldnt think of a name, he looks like an assassin sort of, i used the reve rouille to make him skinnier so... sorry if it seems out of place
- Date: 10/24/2010
- Tags: broken warrior
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Hybird - 10/29/2010
- It's a good start, I used the shoulder pad and reve waist myself a few times because of the lanky feel it gives, and I like the necklace you have on giving it a sense of balance. I would suggest trying to add something red and white close to the lower body, or something spiky or metallic to give it armor like feel and balance, and maybe spiky hair to add sense of danger to the theme. Right now I'd say it's about 3.5, rounded off, a 4.
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- RikuoTsukinura - 10/29/2010
- looks cool! if u find the right background then it would look even better! ^_^
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- iUke Ciel - 10/29/2010
- Amazing Edge~! Hmm...why didn't you tell me you're in the arenas? 5/5 ^_^
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- kurokageryu - 10/27/2010
- it looks asif you started with the punk look and got lost in the middle my advise: dont use a black back drop when your main color is black if you use the gray or white it helps stuff stand out more
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- Amethyst_Cee - 10/27/2010
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My Avatar Grading Rubric
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1.) AVATAR ::
a. Creativity/Theme [+1]
b. Coordination [+1]
c. Overall Effort [+1]
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2.) TITLE ::
a. Fits the avatar [+O]
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3.) DESCRIPTION
a. Expresses what avatar/title is portraying [+O]
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TOTAL RATING :: 3 / 5
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MY COMMENTS :: The title is good, but does your description/avatar explain it to us? There's no real center theme of your avatar.. The avatar itself is good, but I would have liked to see a better description/title - Report As Spam
- CaIabrese - 10/25/2010
- Doesn't look like an assassin to me.
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- Stray Cougar - 10/25/2010
- Lookin' good! 5/5
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