- Title: Belle of the Ball in Gold
- Artist: Ellstarz
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Description:
There's something about the girl, that makes the artists croon,
She's that type of beauty that causes audiences to swoon.
Her eyes, her hair, her smile, provokes the crowd atwitter,
When she's dancing on the floor, en masse the patrons flitter.
But when the night is over, and the crowd all plans to leave,
All eyes look to her, of whose carriage she'll retrieve.
With a smile and a wave, she's down the steps and out the door,
Leaving in her wake, heartbroken beaus across the floor. - Date: 10/12/2010
- Tags: enchanted fantasy beauty white gold
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Comments (2 Comments)
- nileve99 - 10/22/2010
- a little miss-matched 7 cluterd, but i like the poem!
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- War_God_008 - 10/18/2010
- nice poem. the avatar looks a little cluttered. the shoes don't go so well with the dress. and the tiara doesn't either. The halo seems misplaced. overall rating 2/5
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