- by gaaragirl160 |
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- | Submitted on 06/11/2010 |
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- Title: texting and driveing
- Artist: gaaragirl160
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Description:
it all my falt. i didn't know this was going to happen.....
it was just one little text.
my bast firend is dead.
they say i was the lucky one.
i was driveing. when i get that text.
i try to reply back. but i hit that on caming car
it brock my firends neck
throw me out the front window
they find me on the sreet crying and cover
i'm not lucky i killed my bast firend - Date: 06/11/2010
- Tags: texting driveing
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Moth Tale - 06/20/2010
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Different eyes would give more depth and give the message justice. Using a different phone as well if you could would make it better.
Please check your grammar and spelling in the description, it's a serious message and I'm assuming you wanted to pull off a meaningful entry. The poem loses it's impact with all the mistakes. - Report As Spam
- Angel Kazuma - 06/14/2010
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It's a very meaningful entry, but spell-checking your entry would have made it a little better.
4/5 - Report As Spam
