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- Title: Tharin Bloodvere
- Artist: The_Dark_Valor
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Description:
this is an Edited re-post
Poem
One cold night a breeze blows on,
feelings cold this feel so wrong,
a lonely child walks the street,
softly hums this dying beat,
step by step he gets nearer,
slowly building up his fear,
in this dark a flare distinguished
a flash of light is extinguished.
So yeah CONSTRUTIVE(helpful critisisms(OMG NOW AY A CHANCE TO TEASE PEOPLE IN A POSITIVE WAY NO WAY!!!)) are appreciated alot - Date: 11/16/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- souldragon81 - 11/27/2009
- Awesome!
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- aswomeguy12 - 11/25/2009
- frekin awesome
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