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- | Submitted on 11/12/2009 |
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- Title: Can you See the music?
- Artist: chilly_wind
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Description:
The note are my eyes
when I see only the darkness,
with it's light I can see the music.
Can you?
I see it's uplifting melody
and in my mind's eye, I can see the leaves
slowly dancing in the night.
Can you?
They shimmer and sway
as the winds bend with the strokes of the bow
I can see the Music,
Can you?
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This poem is of my own creation and
I found it fitting, please rate and comment,
Thank you. - Date: 11/12/2009
- Tags: music chilly wind sight sound
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Sweet Chocolate Fairy - 11/22/2009
- excellent
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- The Vashta Nerada - 11/21/2009
- Woaaahhh... That's beautiful! o.o Good job!
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- chilly_wind - 11/20/2009
- Thank you for the kind comments and votes and suggestions, ^^ I will take all into account.
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- Rayne-Onmi - 11/18/2009
- cool nice poem 4/5 vote back?
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- XxSerenity HeartxX - 11/18/2009
- The poem fits the avi since you used the autumn leaves for it. I do have a suggestion, you could have used the occulus mythica for the blind eyes.
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- Minoriya - 11/18/2009
- very beautiful! 4/5
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