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- | Submitted on 08/04/2009 |
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- Title: An eye trade gone wrong
- Artist: Cuthdra Niveus
- Description: a girl decided she was going to make a trade wit a shinigami. he said it was an eye trade and she would no longer habve human eyes. foolishlt the girl quickly agreed to the trade then found herself blinded, and the shinigami had now been able to see in the human world.
- Date: 08/04/2009
- Tags: trade gone wrong shinigami deathnote
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Intensive Walrus Unit - 08/16/2009
- Yeah, I don't like the blue hair either. I agree with Dreadful about your grammar, too.
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- Ameisen - 08/16/2009
- Poor grammar and spelling net you a 2.
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- Rozy Kiss - 08/13/2009
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yha, ditch the blue hair and go for black or something... ;D
either way, nice story, 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Bug Chan - 08/10/2009
- it's awesome! biggrin
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- Cuthdra Niveus - 08/10/2009
- the mist is acctualy suppost to be black but it messess up on gaia alot, the apple goes with thhe black album set and i thought it would be a nice touch. not to mention it iss the heart sconsume fog and it kinda looks like it is comeing out of the book
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- Rapidd - 08/10/2009
- i like the idea, but the ava is kinda mismatched. try picking a color scheme to work and make the idea more realistic maybe by taking out some items that are uneccesary. like wats the green mist and apple for? 3/5
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- Karasunaki - 08/10/2009
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Cute idea, but ditch the blue hair.
Also, was the shinigami blind to begin with? Why couldn't he see in the human world? I'd like to see this explained a little more. - Report As Spam
