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- | Submitted on 07/23/2009 |
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- Title: Dimond girl(cool and random)
- Artist: XxashleyxX96ca
- Description: Iwas walking threw a filed when i saw a dimond it was glowing red it was beautiful i piked it up and all of a sudden i got wings and a crown...then a note said " u are our queen" so i flew to the castle and their was a brand new guitar it reed " to our new queen" i played it and their appeard another dimond but it was green and said "u must leave evil is comeing our queen" i went home but i woke up in my bed. It was a dream.
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: dimond girlcool random
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Comments (7 Comments)
- TtheHero - 08/01/2009
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It looks rather shameful.
Look at the other well dressed entries; do you think you actually compare to them? - Report As Spam
- - can you stay strong - - 07/28/2009
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You items need work. Your spelling needs alot of work.
But I like where you were going
1/5 - Report As Spam
- AtOmic_CookiEs - 07/28/2009
- cute story i like it
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- -XS-RULES- - 07/27/2009
- its cute, but the items are a little common. Also, people like a decent description. Your spelling was very waery and im sure you could do better. ^^ but i gives you a three for your effort and story.
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- Alucard the dark one - 07/27/2009
- try using a another guitar 2/5
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- silent_orchestra009 - 07/27/2009
- 1/5
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- Erebus of Chaos - 07/27/2009
- ugh...all noob items...buy some decent to good items and then come back...till then 1/5
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