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- Title: Good Girl Gone Bad
- Artist: Shinigami_Blood_Rose
- Description: She was a princes. Everyone loved her, for how could they not, she was beautiful, sweat, and always helped when she could. But she had a dark seacret nobody knew about. At night she always ran off to go see a special boy. But one night, the day of her 16th birthday, her boyfriend had a special gift for her. He turnd her into a creature of the night. She couldn't go back to her beloved home and family, but she was happy to stay with him. Abd so she did.
- Date: 06/01/2009
- Tags: good girl gone
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- Shinigami_Blood_Rose - 06/29/2009
- The point is she went from a princes to a vampire without telling enyone what happpend to her, i know im bad at spelling, im not copying Twilight, and the dress, hair and shoes shows what she was befor, because she went from beign a Royal Princes to being a vampire, thats what she looked like on the night of her 16th Birthday...and the wings...i dont know why she has those...
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- pokerules22 - 06/14/2009
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2/5
Um... more effort, please. Please make your description as legible as possible. "She was beautiful, SWEAT, and..." "...was a PRINCES." "He TURND her..." "ABD so she did."
2nd: I don't see much wrong with her. The only thing that suggests something unnatural is her wings. The dress, shoes, and ultra-pampered hair makes it seem like she is going to the prom, not transforming into a "creature of the night." All it looks like is that she is a gothic girl that had wings on for a costume. - Report As Spam
- ScarletSylphentine - 06/12/2009
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learn how to spell...
loose the dress and shoes...
other wise... 3/5 for effort - Report As Spam
- frogsrockmysox29 - 06/12/2009
- umm the dress and shoes killed it
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- x Spaghetti Cat - 06/11/2009
- can you even spell anything right???
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- insane9999 - 06/10/2009
- very vasmpireish i like it but next time put mor effort in it and im not sayen u wer but dont copy twilight cuz waaaaaay to many pplz ar 4/5
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- x-iTzDalliz-x - 06/09/2009
- I like the avi i just feel that the description and title could use some work.Anyway 4/5
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