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- | Submitted on 03/07/2009 |
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- Title: The Hungry Bird.
- Artist: Ess Tee Eff Yuu
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Description:
Once upon a time hungry bird spied a plant in full bloom
Awed by the blossoms he was ignorant to his doom.
Slowly he approached, thinking of his meal
Another life the plant would steal.
Reaching out his beak to take a bite
The plant's arms extended, provoking a fight.
The bird was surprised, and jumped back in fear
But the plant had a hold on him, it would appear.
What awaits the hungry bird?
Well how absurd
He will become the meal of the plant
You other birds may wish to recant... - Date: 03/07/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LifeSuxEatCake - 03/12/2009
- Lol xD I agree, maybe lose the axe? But it's really good anyways... love the poem! :3
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- MisokaDemonFox - 03/11/2009
- lose the axe and it'll look a lot better, other than thats its pretty ok
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- Ess Tee Eff Yuu - 03/09/2009
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Lol. xD
@Rethos ; Lulz, that was a bit of my point. o.o
@Spiky ; Thanks. xD My weakness is rhyming things, acctually. xD - Report As Spam
- Spiky JoJo - 03/08/2009
- You have an unfair advantage with that poem! Those of us who can't write have to make really good avi's. I know I sound jealous, maybe because I am. 5/5 for story 3/5 for avi
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- Rethos - 03/08/2009
- makes me laugh smile only thing is the axe, plants do not carry axes biggrin 4/5
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- jeedx - 03/08/2009
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haHAhahahHA!
The flamingo
and the girl wit the axe Made Me laugh!
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- Twixxled - 03/08/2009
- Interesting ^^ 5/5
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