- Title: Grimpo the The Possessed One
- Artist: Sin155
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Description:
On a walk he stumbeld apon an egg. It was a beatifull egg. It was gold and white. For some reason he felt he had to take it. On his walk back with the egg, the egg hatched. A small black creater with red eyes came from it.
He ketp it. The chef of the village comfronted him. "I want to be stronger." Gimpo said. Then he Killed the chef with his blade. Then he killed his whole village. He went killing everyting and evey one in his path.
my first XD plzz be nice ty. - Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: thepossessedone
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sin155 - 02/01/2009
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plzz comment XD
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- -Insanity4Sanity- - 01/30/2009
- Good job I like him!
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- RyuInugami - 01/30/2009
- seems good, but your description could use a little work
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- Ichigari Taru - 01/29/2009
- Not bad...he looks like a rather evil looking worrier from Final Fantasy to me for some reason...the story needs more depth yet I know there is a limit to how much you can write....but not bad
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- starz84 - 01/28/2009
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your avi and story are awsome 5/5
thanks for your vote smile - Report As Spam
- Lil_J_TheDarkAngel - 01/28/2009
- Not bad for your first time 5/5
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- xXxEternal_BlissxXx - 01/27/2009
- Not bad for your first time! ^_^ *4* Vote back?
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