- Title: Off With Her Head!
- Artist: SGTSyn
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Description:
I found this little girl, with a basket made of wood.
She was whistling and skipping, in her little red hood.
I followed her closely, towards an old stone house.
Slowly inching closer, no louder than a mouse.
I jumped on her back, as she screamed for help.
Covering her mouth, the blade scraped her scalp.
Right for her neck, my hands tainted red.
One swift cut, and off with her head.
- Date: 12/30/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Bibbly - 01/11/2009
- AMAZING POEM NICE AVI
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- xXrishanE_JerseYx - 01/11/2009
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this is a really good story..you really kick a** dude...way to go
GOLD WHORES ROCK - Report As Spam
- Auroki - 01/10/2009
- OMFG this is better than than the trix rabbit that won last week!! WOOHOO 5 STARS FOR SURE!!!
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- IceDiamondKitty1 - 01/10/2009
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5 stars from me.
nice poem, nice avatar. you kick a** man. haha
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- SGTSyn - 01/09/2009
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I would like to clear up a couple things.
The blade can scrape her scalp prior to cutting her neck...
Secondly, The proper pronunciation of scalp, sounds like help. Scalp is pronounced Skaelp. - Report As Spam