- Title: Melancholy
- Artist: nambichoo
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Description:
The leaves are at my feet. The grass is dead.
The air is bitter as a dragonbite.
I hear the thunder moaning overhead,
Like some great creature dying in the night.
The winter wraps my shoulders like a shawl,
And I can taste the still unfallen snow.
The darkness comes like footsteps in the hall.
The winds reclaim the world, and I must go.
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As always, comments and critiques are loved! Every single vote is appreciated!
Thank you in advance! - Date: 05/27/2007
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Comments (7 Comments)
- bagosamundo - 05/27/2007
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for me i think its sorta clustered but still i
kinda like it also the story is pretty good ^_^ i
wish you commented me earlier so i could have
voted though xp - Report As Spam
- julie1d1er0 - 05/27/2007
- Cool
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- Theisseng - 05/27/2007
- Nice use of gray and ragged clothes.
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- lipsweet - 05/27/2007
- nice
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- CrimsonPlasmaBeam - 05/27/2007
- Awsome!
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- Vivienne Valentine - 05/27/2007
- It's different. 10/10
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- Maid_Sky - 05/27/2007
- Best I've seen, good job.
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