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- Title: friends
- Artist: hugzy-mania
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Description:
Once upon a time there was a poor beggar his life was ruined so poor nothing to eat he had 1 friend kaya the cat and one day they were so hungry that he died cuz no one ever gave them anything and the grave was protected by the cat his best friend kaya protected the grave til she dies.... and the beggar came back to revenge the people who ignored him......
he is now mad to everyone who ignores beggars...
THE END
Im a pinoy! lol pls vote... the story had a lesson that you should give - Date: 01/13/2008
- Tags: blackgloves snowboredpantsblue that70swhiteshirt grayskashoes kayathecatlounging
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ingrid Anette - 01/12/2008
- 3/10
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- overprices667559 - 01/12/2008
- Oh!... this is interesting ava!
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- silentdreameress - 01/12/2008
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interesting story! but if it was about a boy who
was poor and wanted revenge on the people who
ignored him, why was Kaya the cat in the story?
And if he was poor and alone why did he have a
grave? Oh and if he died of starvation why did
Kaya live longer and die later than him of
starvation? Sorry, I get confused easily ^^;
But
the story was great! Although the ending was a
little bit haunting ^^;;
10/10 and good luck (wow
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- 0 B 3 Y - 01/12/2008
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- nomegustalapizza - 01/12/2008
- so colorful ava!
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- seguoikawaiionigiri - 01/12/2008
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- White Island 311 - 01/11/2008
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