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- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: Ah My God!
- Artist: iSkyPiracy
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Description:
Ah, such splendor of this god.
whom presided over wealth and nature.
Those whom worshipped him found favor in many ways.
Be that it would be money, plentyful harvest, or even that of love.
Ah such splendor it is to be a god.
To be sit high upon thy throne.
Needlessly watching those whom cared for you and spoke only kindly of your name.
To be a God, both pitied and feared.
Loved and respected.
Despised and tormented.... - Date: 09/11/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Dennyloves - 09/21/2008
- alsome
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- Azume-chan - 09/21/2008
- Since when God had pink hair?
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- iMurderYouLater - 09/21/2008
- Nice. But a little too cluttered.
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- soren_alenko - 09/19/2008
- too cluttered 1/5
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- Shishioh Tai - 09/19/2008
- You're supposed to use "who" when the "who" is the party taking action. Who worshipped, who cared. "Whom" is when the party is being acted upon or toward, i.e.: to whom you shall answer, upon whom he wrought his vengeance. 1/5.
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- crystalflame3000 - 09/19/2008
- wtf u gots on and i thought i look weird
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- Intimate Itching - 09/18/2008
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I don't reallly like it.
Too much going on.
1 star. - Report As Spam
