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- | Submitted on 08/28/2011 |
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- Title: In the Swamp
- Artist: Jamais Changeant
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Description:
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My face is always hidden;
No expression for them to see.
What a dreary way of living,
Will you stay here with me?
Not a lot pass through here,
When they do they run.
It can be awfully lonely;
I hardly even see the sun.
This is my home for what it's worth
It's quiet and dark and damp.
Now I know you're going to leave soon
That's the way of the swamp.
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Comments appreciated as always! - Date: 08/28/2011
- Tags: swamp lonely
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Misty_wolf_of Alagaesia - 09/02/2011
- A great poem, very nice 5/5
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- PurpleShadeHaze - 09/02/2011
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Love the poem! smile Very original!
5/5
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- Eliza Rain - 09/01/2011
- Quite original. I liked the poem as well. 5/5
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- Bullshitting - 09/01/2011
- Not the best avatar I've seen so far, but one of the best. It's awesome, 5/5.
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- Euluxity - 09/01/2011
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Nice avi, Hate rhyming in poems honestly.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Endlessly Silenced - 08/31/2011
- Ugly bird, nice avie. wink
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- yingalin - 08/31/2011
- Cool i like the name too 5/5
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