- Title: Lost Sunbeam
- Artist: Rena9b
- Description: When the sun is high in the sky her children the sunbeams come down from the heavens to earth. One day the youngest sunbeam was playing in a field and didn't notice her sisters moving home with the sunset. A small white face peeked through the roses at her curiously and the littlest sunbeam reached out her hand to the creature of the moon and a glowing friendship began. On the nights where the moon seems to shine more brightly than usual you can tell that the two friends are together once again.
- Date: 10/02/2008
- Tags: lost sunbeam hermesmoon friendship moonbeam
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Sweet Insensibility - 10/07/2008
- Its amazing + the story is not funny, its wonderful! I dont think its cluttered. I think the red rose puts it on blance perfectly! This is my favorte avatar so far, 5/5!
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- Saint Valentino - 10/06/2008
- It's wonderful! The description sounds alot like something I would write... x] The below comments are right though, the mood bubble is a bit distracting and the little bunnies by her feet are also... just there. Otherwise, it's a wonderful piece. :]
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- Lady March Hare - 10/06/2008
- Very pretty, and I like the description. The balance is off a bit... maybe remove the mood bubble and add some gold near the feet? But overall a very nice entry!
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- dirigible plum - 10/06/2008
- This could be really good with a bit less clutter. I'd remove the Angelic Mood Bubble, Hermes Moons (except the scarf-bit). Maybe try the Art Nouveau from Masterpieces for the background.
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- Hinata-Chan2588 - 10/06/2008
- cool 5/5
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- caramelancholique - 10/03/2008
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Woot! Woot! Hermes' Moon? I didn't notice that was there! Anyway, wonderful story, title, and submission.
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