- Title: Melancholy
- Artist: nambichoo
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Description:
The leaves are at my feet. The grass is dead.
The air is bitter as a dragonbite.
I hear the thunder moaning overhead,
Like some great creature dying in the night.
The winter wraps my shoulders like a shawl,
And I can taste the still unfallen snow.
The darkness comes like footsteps in the hall.
The winds reclaim the world, and I must go.
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As always, comments and critiques are loved! Every single vote is appreciated!
Thank you in advance! - Date: 05/27/2007
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shelcombakasfire - 05/26/2007
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I like it, quite a lot! I'm sad to say that if
your luck is anythign like mine, no one will read
your description.I would've added a Winter Rose as
"Petal Rain" just due to the addition of snow, and
as close as you'll get. The sootface explode
wasn't neccesarry, but ti wasn't a hinderance.
Either way, I like it, and so far it's the best
I've seen tonight. So, you geta 10! WOOOOO! Heh,
hope this helped at all... >_> I fail @ helpful
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- Akio~Mitsushi - 05/26/2007
- 10
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- DarkEyesLeadToDarkLies - 05/26/2007
- Kick a**.
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- cookie_monstar - 05/26/2007
- nive job
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- Xille - 05/26/2007
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I love.
<3 - Report As Spam
- xx_Beach_Blond_xx - 05/26/2007
- nice job
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- Ballada_The_Fox_Dragon - 05/26/2007
- nice avatar
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