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  • Title: I'm Your Cavity
  • Artist: Toxik Salad
  • Description: Feeling a silent pain
    or ache to wince
    For your foolish desire
    Im here as you gluttonously wished
    Dont bite down or do please do
    Oh isnt it tasty Isnt it divine
    My sweetness with a pinch of sour
    Savor the taste
    Theres no rush
    Hmm oh Those you say
    Dont mind them
    They don't bite
    Whats this now
    Im the pain that hinders you
    Havent you realized it yet
    Tsk really now
    Cant you see
    Whats been done
    was by you alone
    I thought youd know
    eating sugary sweets and sour-like treats
    that cavities would grow
  • Date: 10/30/2011
  • Tags: imyourcavity
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Toxik Salad - 11/05/2011
  • Thank you all for your rates and comments. I really appreciate them, mostly on the poem. Since its the first poem I have ever written. I don't particularly find interest in writing and reading literature. The poem was kind of like a spontaneous spark, and I even amazed myself with the outcome. Though its nothing fancy, I still find it amusing and satisfying. . u.
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