- When the first snowflake falls the trees are green. When the first Snowflake falls the children smile... When the first snowflake falls it flows like a feather... when the first snowflake falls a kiss is consumed. But when the first snowflake falls it melts into a tear with no one to share...
- by --Anime_l3ear-- |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: When the First Snowflake falls
- Artist: --Anime_l3ear--
- Description: My second entry I just wanna make sure i have a good chance. Um this is about a snowflake who fell before any other and melts into a tear drop without anyone to die with. Very sad...^^
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: first snowflake falls
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Comments (7 Comments)
- dragunov1000 - 05/13/2009
- boo boo jk lmao i like this poem its very touching its like u losing ur love of your life
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- I am deatheater - 02/21/2009
- Wow,you sardonically impressing the readers with cajole of words like the 'trees are green','children smile','flows like a feather','a kiss is consumed','it melts into a tear with no one to share'.How PATHETIC IS THAT TO ALL OF US!!!
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- Rockliver24 - 02/15/2009
- that was beatiful i had never herd such a fantastic poem in my life you should be veary happy with yourself im impressed i almost cried it was that good
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- Bby_Got_Gme - 01/29/2009
- wow thats wow i mean straight to the soul wow u know wut i mean
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- GMOD560 - 01/25/2009
- Very heartwarming and nice to hear.
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- l3Lack_fire_AsSaSiN - 12/21/2008
- wow little dj wrights big things
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- beta9222 - 12/21/2008
- wow this is very sad but we'll both die together right=D
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