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Holiday, Holiday, Oh lovely Holiday! I wish I could see the gleam of the lights. The lights in the streets. Like floating in heaven above. I hear a shout and a bell screaming about. As Santa Clause Rides his sleigh.
- by Lunar_Horizon |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: Holidays
- Artist: Lunar_Horizon
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Holidays!!! - Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: holidays
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Comments (7 Comments)
- xi twin_less ix - 06/19/2010
- It's lovley. Though you could at another few stanzas. And Put them in better verses. This is really good. I like your metophors. Hurray! 3/5.
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- Gabstizzle - 07/10/2009
- Did u ever think of adding something thats actually good?
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- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- if you check you're spelling, perfection on pixels.
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- Shin3_Brit3 - 06/16/2009
- well i thnk u cud have put some effort in this
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- I AM THE I AM - 03/29/2009
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thats gay even a moron could do that
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- xX_Kozakura_Xx - 02/27/2009
- fail~ish 3/5
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- x-Cloud Drop-x - 12/14/2008
- Could be better, sister. Hehhe... don't be rude to me just because. This is getting a vote! Yay you!
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