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- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: December 25th
- Artist: purple_princess_rocks
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Description:
White Wonderland,
Lies outside in wait.
Smooth white,
Sparkling crystals,
Oh so inviting.
But the warmth I"m feeling,
Oh so much more appealing,
For family love beats all.
Fireplace crackling,
Carols, people singing
My family,
Laughing together as one.
And as the hands of the clock,
Meet at 12,
I know,
Another Merry Christmas,
Has gone. - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: december 25th christmas
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Warrior of Narnia - 07/14/2009
- your poem is good but you were supposed to put it where you put plz comment....blah blah.....buty good poeom 4/5
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- spook98 - 02/06/2009
- add more emotion
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