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This sadness... inside me. tearing me apart.
every breath..every step.. is tearing me apart..
i look around.. to see the laughter of children
but for some reason.. it does not matter to me
i feel Lonely....Unloved.. Separated...
This feelings.... is there no cure to this..
The sadness falling through me like snow..
freezing me in its frozen darkness...
tears run down my face as i feel as if there is no more
time for me... i give up.. i cant take this pain anymore..
- by The-Suicide-Angel |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The sadness inside me
- Artist: The-Suicide-Angel
- Description: My deepest feelings...this feelings..its hard to express what i feel.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: changed life
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Jess369 - 01/09/2010
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The only thing I can offer is with each new point,
Start new paragraphs often,
And use a capital with every beginning word,
With a capital letter,
But other than that, I like it! - Report As Spam
- Princesse_Meduses - 10/23/2009
- awesome poem, sometimes i feel like that
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- madil80 - 08/02/2009
- I agree wid 'ezzy111'
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- ezzy111 - 07/10/2009
- This is a beautiful poem!!! 1 of my favs! sometimes i feel the same. i just wanted 2 cry!!! 5/5 smile
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- sm00shed ba_Nana_s - 02/24/2009
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This poem...it was heartbreaking, emotional, beautiful, raw, and sincere. My heart aches for you. It was fantastic.
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Rockliver24 - 02/15/2009
- i i ... i cant say how beatiful that was it was so sad it was amazing the deppresion in that peom was great i loved it
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- dim nero - 12/25/2008
- wow mj u sound lyk ricky ricardo kinda not really dude did u write that wen leanna dumped u or somethin
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