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There once was an elf
Who cared for only himself
But when it came to Christmas,
A kind spirit arose that came with a toy filled shelf
Toys would be scattered at every continent, island, and isthmus
- by nobodyisnoone11 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Spirit of an Elf
- Artist: nobodyisnoone11
- Description: A 5 line limerick
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: spirit elves christmas toys
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Comments (7 Comments)
- i theta - 08/23/2010
- nice limerick, although the last two lines are too long to enable it to flow properly :/
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- x-SmokeKushhh - 05/23/2010
- u rock
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- _J05E_ - 12/29/2009
- to simple u need more lines an a beter rim
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- -x-forever-dreaming--xx- - 03/31/2009
- Cool, simple. smile smile 5/5 I feel really kind.
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- TROKR - 03/30/2009
- that was tight yo
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- lil_miss_swagga22 - 03/28/2009
- that i love!!!ooohoooh i so have a question.Do u love watching InuYasha?????
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- iiONE_LuB - 01/30/2009
- heyy that poem was pretty good!!=]
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