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Tiny and graceful
Floating to Earth, just pure bliss
Big things, small package
- by Neko MiraMira |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: A Happy Holiday To All!
- Artist: Neko MiraMira
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Description:
I figured I would stick to my specialty: Haikus
For those who don't know the difference, haikus use the following meter.
Line 1: 5 syllables
Line 2: 7 syllables
Line 3: 5 syllables
Well, here goes. ^_^ - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: happy holiday haiku winter snow
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Royalty24 - 06/27/2009
- Its great for a haiku and a poem I want to give you 5 but somthing in me is saying 4. We will see!!
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- Mattation4ever - 01/16/2009
- Its a godo start but need mroe stuff on it poems usually have mroe then 5-4 lines
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- Neko MiraMira - 12/17/2008
- Ah, okay. ^_^ Thanks for the advice! ^_^
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- Kamuel - 12/16/2008
- it is ok but i think it does not show all the emotion in the holidays you could have chosen your words better
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