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Christmas
Candy canes sweet, tree ornaments attractive, christams lights bright, snowflakes beautiful, santa jolly, Christmas carols make you feel full of love, presents bring happiness, I want all of those but then all I would need is you.
- by invisibleandalone |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: all I need is you
- Artist: invisibleandalone
- Description: about needing a special someone for christmas
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: lovehappinessneed
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Amras Tasatir - 06/12/2011
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I would suggest writing this in a list format.
Candy canes sweet,
tree ornaments attractive,
Christmas lights bright [etc].
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- crazy4meee - 07/28/2009
- wow dats deep
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- xSarah_May - 04/23/2009
- good
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- Vhalcrist - 03/17/2009
- nice try. atleast you try'd right? keep it up.
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