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As I lay here in bed watching the snow fall my heart
burns like the wood in the fireplace.
It burns for you. It needs you during this season.
I need you to keep me warm and safe.
I need you to help wrap presents and laugh with our friends and family.
We all need you to be apart of us once more.
My heart will continue to burn like the wood in the fireplace until you come back.
- by Marilyn Monroe 2 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: My Heart Burns
- Artist: Marilyn Monroe 2
- Description: A warm poem saying how much a person may need another one around Christmas time,
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: heart burns
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Cryora - 10/18/2009
- i see where your going with this but, the word connotation doesnt exactly match the rest of your poem. try to make it less specific like when you say "It needs you during this season" you should've written, "My heart yearns for your company" or something like that. hope this helps.
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- shadowguy315 - 07/08/2009
- REALLY?! this is just sad, anyone could write something as stupid as that!
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- shady the emo - 02/07/2009
- burnin burnin yey muma
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- Ballin_So_Fresh - 01/08/2009
- wow
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