- Title: Beautiful Day
- Artist: KoushakuX
- Description: Okay sooo this was another avi request only this time was a hair experiment and I started playing with clouds. Hope you guys like it. Even if just a little bit lol :D
- Date: 09/28/2012
- Tags: beautifulskyclouds
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Comments (4 Comments)
- KoushakuX - 09/29/2012
- Hmm... Well although it was just a test I appreciate the feedback. The lack of detail and unnatural pose is most likely due the fact I paid little attention to them and focused more on what I was concerned with. But thank your for the criticism and I will keep it in mind for future request.
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- Soojin123 - 09/28/2012
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overall, it's nice. Figured I could provide some constructive criticism [character limits fml]
-hair: shade the upper part more. while detailed, it lacks depth.
-chest/arm: well..having your chest push through your arm like that would not be comfortable or natural. either that, or i actually dont understand the female body
-waist: shading on right side (our left) seems to have been lost..
-legs: area from knee to calf looks slightly unnatural.
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- MintyMiDraws - 09/28/2012
- 5/5! This is incredible!! emotion_bigheart
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- BobCatHKSS - 09/28/2012
- 5/5, you should draw for the HKSS manga.
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