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  • Title: Art
  • Artist: The Pickle Master
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  • Date: 04/15/2011
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  • Sesshy_Moon - 04/15/2011
  • ...continued.
    detail, depth, proportional, and clean

    Please don't take any of this as an insult or as a flame. I assure you, they are not. I'm simply giving constructive criticism on this because I see the potential.
    Practice, and good luck! biggrin
  • Sesshy_Moon - 04/15/2011
  • Her eyes are beautiful. The hair has great potential as well. If only the rest of the drawing had the same quality.
    The dress has a good design, but the detail needs to be cleaner. Same with the hair (and take a little off the top). The part draped on her shoulder should have a more natural flow.
    Also, the bow on her head needs more detail. It looks flat.
    And finally, her hands need work.
    Don't be discouraged; everyone has trouble with hands. ^-^

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