- Title: Me (in charcoal)
- Artist: alarabee
- Description: i sorta messed up on the lips but other then that i love it
- Date: 04/27/2010
- Tags: charcoal
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Nisper - 07/17/2010
- i can't really say anything. dreadful. try using a grid. 2/5
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- helphyra - 05/02/2010
- take care with the angle
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- x3final-break - 05/01/2010
- yeah you could probably work on the angle like everyone else is saying. your colouring isnt that great and she looks like shes wearing a wig. sorry. 2/5
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- DoodleSnicker - 04/30/2010
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"Draw what you see, not what you know."
Where did I hear that? I forget. Anyways, look at the angle of the face; it isn't just a straight line down, the hair isn't just one large blob. The lines should also be less defined.
Sorry, I think I was too harsh... - Report As Spam
- chavinist - 04/28/2010
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agreed with the person below
not to mention the fact the angle isnt exactly right, but u have to excuse me, im a bit of a detail whore biggrin - Report As Spam
- technicoloryawn - 04/27/2010
- Keep practicing. Very blotchy and stiff.
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