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  • Title: The vampire
  • Artist: borgny
  • Description: my deviantart: http://miiyako.deviantart.com/
  • Date: 03/22/2010
  • Tags: vampire
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/25/2010
  • -continued-
    cyclopse. You should always keep two eyes visible. You do a very good job at detail and coloring. Maybe trying to make your characters a little more relastic - anime style? 4/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 03/25/2010
  • I'll add on to green_eyed ghost critique.
    Yes, there needs to be something more going on in the background. I say this because there is too much negative space. Perhaps adding more roses that expand from the corner?
    The mouth, I do agree, it looks odd. Perhaps the mouth might need to be move down from the nose (and might need to be strecthed a little bit to the left).
    I know you're trying to make it look dramatic, but having the other eye invisible in the shade makes her look like she's a
  • chiquita55 - 03/24/2010
  • NO I THINK IT LOOKS JUST FINE I LOVE EVERYTHING MOSTLY THE ROSES AND TO MUCH DETAIL IS WEARD I LIKE IT JUST THE WAY IT IS 3/5
  • green_eyed_ghost - 03/22/2010
  • needs work.
    1. add a background (besides the roses in the corner, they are good though)
    2.the mouth looks a bit odd, you should resolve that
    3. maybe a second eye?
 
 
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