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  • Jade
  • Title: Jade
  • Artist: Disabledaccountplz18
  • Description: I was bored and wondered if you can you give me criticism and some tips
    Be harmless plz.....
  • Date: 01/28/2010
  • Tags: jade
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • KikuMizu - 01/28/2010
  • I cannot read the writing well. It might help if the background was in a darker color. And something is flashing behind her back so I am curious to what it is. And the spear looks pretty tiny; maybe make the pole thicker?
    Other than that, I like the concept and the shading (big fan of shading in general because I can't do it well) and the face isn't bad either. The theme is visable and easy to pick out so I give it a good rating.
 
 
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