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  • jst a pretty girl enhanced
  • Title: jst a pretty girl enhanced
  • Artist: four_leaf_clover_22
  • Description: as sujested i added mre detail to the clothing and fixed the feet thou i dnt no if i added enough detail to the clothing well if u think i ddnt jst comment and tell me wat else i need to fix thk u special thnx to GenkiYamaguchi
  • Date: 01/22/2010
  • Tags: pretty girl anhanced
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Thornebee - 02/11/2010
  • She seems to be just.. there. Whatever emotion she has isn't coming across and her pose is a bit boring. I'd suggest working on general anatomy and value. Right now she looks gray all over without much contrast.
  • GenkiYamaguchi - 01/23/2010
  • Try to make the details more subtle and the sketch lines less
    visable, or not visable at all. Try to make her mouth, eyes, and
    body language match. Right now her eyes say "innocently existing" her mouth says "Suprized" and her body language says "horny" (From the way her legs are placed and the area in which she is placing her hands.)
 
 
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