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  • Title: winter afternoon
  • Artist: xXDead-Before-It-BeganXx
  • Description: ehh just due to the change of the season n the weather growing colder i drew a picture of a girl n since during this time of year u can see ur breath i thought id make hers form a heart
  • Date: 12/07/2009
  • Tags: winter afternoon
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 12/07/2009
  • OOH! And I just noticed something when I went for rating it! I see the neck line but then suddenly, as I go down from the the hair, it vanishes even when exposable skin is seen (and it should be there). As I said, look at reference or take a picture of you or a participant and take a very careful look at the positions.
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 12/07/2009
  • -continuing-
    improvements from when you started. What I suggest is that you take a closer look at the anatomy at the neck and take a look at all of the exposing lines and curves on the chest. That should really get your drawing a nice, detailed look. Also, like I suggested before, take a picture of yourself in the position you are in to get an almost accurate position of what you want to draw (or get a friend or sibling for a better angle). 3/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 12/07/2009
  • Excellent, excellent, excellent! The anatomy is looking much, much better or is it you are better at side views. Your facial anatomy is looking better too. Like what wolfygrrl said, the mouth needs work. Make the bottom lip thicker. Now from the eyes up, you need to expose the forehead. And the chest looks a little disprortioned (or is she flat chested). You getting much, much better at anatomy. I am glad you still seek my critiques to help you through and I am also happy that I am seeing
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