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  • Eostre
  • Title: Eostre
  • Artist: ShannenChan
  • Description: Watercolor and colored pencil on rag paper. Part of a series of twelve I did almost a year ago.
  • Date: 11/06/2009
  • Tags: eostre goddess goddesses
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 11/08/2009
  • -continuing-
    ... and the lining of the breasts (unless she's a young girl... which I doubt she is). You might as well expose more of the elbows too. Even though it was done over a year ago, you can still improve it to make it look better and more presentable for your profilo if you want to make a career out of your art. You are doing a great job; keep it up. 4/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 11/08/2009
  • -continuing-
    as the bottom lip (and the position it's in looks odd). And maybe show the indents on the lips, to make it look more 3D and detailed. The chin I believe should be exposed just a little more out (or maybe it's the jawline giving off that illusion). Try to look at the refrence you were drawing this from and careful map out the chin (if you were completly drawing this from scratch, try looking at references). Now moving to the rest of the body show some evidence of the shoulder plates
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 11/08/2009
  • Nice form! You also did a nice job blending and using different variations of colors to give off a 3D look. Now let's just take it another step further. You need work on the face; and I know faces are the most difficult part of human anatomy, but with your skill you'll nail it in no time! The eyes need little work; try to color in detail in the iris. The eye brows might be too squished in (or unless they actually look like that). Now the lips are a big concern; the top lip shouldn't be as thick
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