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  • Title: Automaton
  • Artist: Mrfalco
  • Description: A simple automaton, long abandoned on some forgotten rock in the corner of the universe, repaired recently by a skilled technician's hand. It seems to have no external influence, acting of it's own accord.
  • Date: 10/13/2009
  • Tags: robot automaton sentient
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • CapedNinja - 01/11/2010
  • Not bad. But since I specialize in mechas, I can say this:
    Improve the left arm. And put the weapon side in the foreground because everyone's interested in the weapon, not a plain old arm. And remember to show what connects each joint; don't just cover it up.
  • Electric_Catfish - 10/14/2009
  • Try using solid lines for the lineart; it will give it a more 'stable' look, as opposed to such sketchy one. Also, try drawing bigger! I would love to see some of the details that we're missing at this smaller size.
 
 
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