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  • Melodrama
  • Title: Melodrama
  • Artist: End8less
  • Description: My first work on watercolors it was done on simple paper, not prepared for watercolor use thus the weird markings on it.
    It's not completed I planned to erase all the color mishaps and work forwars on it but the actual portrait was ruined. I'm planning to redo it completly with prepared paper and fix anatomy and proportion mistakes. I would like constructive critique on how to improve please thank you in advance.
  • Date: 09/23/2009
  • Tags: crying joker melodrama watercolors
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Comments (1 Comments)
  • Drifting Thoughts - 09/26/2009
  • first off, it looks vry nice for watercolor
    uh i think the arm is too strange, perhaps adding wrinkles and slight creases on the garb would make it look more realistic n less idealized.
    the strands of hair going down btw the index and middle finger looks too out of place
    and i feel that the shoulders could be a lil bigger, compared to how big his arm is...
    other than that very nice. 5
 
 
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