- Title: Kanji and Kyle in the car
- Artist: Tesunie
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Description:
Just a sketch of a panel of a comic I'm trying to work on.
Any suggestions on style or things to fix?
Like this? See more here! http://tesunie.deviantart.com/ - Date: 09/21/2009
- Tags: kanji kyle
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Xxthe_quiet_scares_mexX - 12/06/2009
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idk wat the other guy is saying its looks great!
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- DrLavitz - 09/24/2009
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Shoulders on the kid in the front are a bit too squished. there's also no space between him and the car door, it's as if he's glued to it.
Kid in the back also seems to be standing up, if his legs were going straight or even at an angle, they'd be going through the car seat.His neck is also a bit too long. - Report As Spam
