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  • What's this?
  • Title: What's this?
  • Artist: AllSanityLost
  • Description: This started out as an avi art, but it kinda took on a mind of it's own ^.^
    I think her expression says "What's this?" but that's just my opinion. *shrugs* I like her eyes, but don't care too much for her hair.
    Costructive criticism is greatly appreciated! I would like to know what I need to work on! But please, don't be outright mean. Thank you much!
  • Date: 07/21/2009
  • Tags: avatar snow whats
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Altria Mizuno - 08/07/2010
  • ~Face's good but the rest of the body proportions are wrong.Girls should have hips larger then shoulders.Her hands are too small and what's up with left arm?Somehow it looks like it's going behind her back and the hand is just floating there.Try making it more clearly visible that it connects to the hand,like with the right arm.Her feet look too small,like they would not hold her if she stood up.I'd make them bigger as well.I would recommend drawing her out fully and then putting on clothes.
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