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  • WOTF: Firestar
  • Title: WOTF: Firestar
  • Artist: Raleigh the Vampire-Fox
  • Description: Probably one of my best drawings. Firestar from the Warriors series. WOTF=Warriors Of The Forest. Please comment and rate!
  • Date: 06/17/2009
  • Tags: wotf firestar warriors
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Comments (6 Comments)
  • I robotkittie I - 01/26/2011
  • uhhhh
    need to work on ur eyes
    and the strucure of the cat...
    ive read the series so i know what ur talkin about soooo
    4/5 ^- ^
  • kiki2blue - 06/18/2009
  • whoops... made a mistake in my comment... the back goes upward in the middle and then goes back down... wow... I hate when I make those mistakes...
  • kiki2blue - 06/18/2009
  • just a tip... (I'm not very good at drawing cats either) the back has a curve. It goes upward in the middle and then goes back up. The underside starts thick and then gets thinner. the tail needs to be a bit thicker as well. if you don't mind me saying, you can go crazy on the head hair. make it go up more, it's usually more fun to draw and better looking. also, maybe work on the eyes a little. maybe darken the iris a little. so, good job, great start, keep practicing and I'll give you a 3-5.
  • apollosgirl95 - 06/17/2009
  • uh...theres no shading! u should definatly work on the anatomy cuz their bodies arent rectangular. but u have potential! sorry if i sounded mean...
 
 
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