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  • Broken Doll...
  • Title: Broken Doll...
  • Artist: Choco-Mandy
  • Description: Well, I'm submitting this because I've never submitted anything into gaia.
    This was a sketchbook assignment for my art class.
    Constructive crit, please?
  • Date: 06/06/2009
  • Tags: broken doll
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Pinkkitty6886 - 06/07/2009
  • Try coloring the hair almost all the same some high lights here and there. otherwise this will be da next mona lisa
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 06/07/2009
  • An interesting piece. Here are some suggestions;
    the girl's face looks relatively smaller than the guy's. And also that her eyelids are not alined. Also, the darkest point on the girl's hair makes it look like that is the girl's hair root, which doesn't seem right. And the man's jacket on the right shoulder might need to be smoothed out and the design on the left side might need to be smaller.
    But it's a good piece, I like how you colored this.
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