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  • At The Cabaret - UNFINISHED
  • Title: At The Cabaret - UNFINISHED
  • Artist: Melodokii
  • Description: BAD SCAN ALERT. 'KAY her shoulders are funny and she looks like she's got her head on backwards and there's no background to speak of but i dont really care at this pointtttt CUZ ITS NOT FINISHED YAY BUT I DONT WANT TO WORK MORE ON IT RIGHT NAOW

    Ah well.

    Cropped some of the ugly white space from above her head.

    I'm not exactly expecting a 5/5 or anything on this one.
  • Date: 05/23/2009
  • Tags: cabaret burlesque melodokii dokii
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • Parsleys Thyme - 10/14/2009
  • AWESOME!!!! I love it!

    I know, that's happening with a lot of art recently. It's been happening with mine, and it's really annoying.
    5/5 for you! You deserve it. Great job!!
    Check out my work, please?
  • Melodokii - 05/26/2009
  • :S I don't get you. If you want to rate 1/5 why not make a reason, critique, explain what can be improved.

    Don't just flame other people's works so that yours looks better.
  • Melodokii - 05/23/2009
  • Thank you! biggrin

    I know what you mean about the face, I'll try using a mirror for proportions when fixing it next time I work on this piece. Thank you for the tip on the shoulders, I will incorporate that too. smile

    Thankyou again! x
  • Zeefruit - 05/23/2009
  • This would have been a 5/5 if her face was more proportionate. Right now it's just too big for her head. Maybe next time you could look at your own head in a mirror while you sketch, in order to get more realistic, natural-looking proportions. The rest of the image looks great, though. (If she is supposed to be pushing her shoulders back, you could try sublty accentuating her shoulderblades.)
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