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  • Kiyomi
Comments (6 Comments)
  • selaphim - 03/28/2009
  • I think with a little more detail and the fixing of few flaws, this could be a 5/5! I love it. I'm a fan of Bleach too xD
  • Ryo Sho Sen - 03/26/2009
  • thanks, : ] I realize there are flaws in drawing. For instance I think one arm is a whole lot longer then the other. Or it just looks that way to me. This is only my second drawing done in a paint program, so all other mistakes aside I think it went fairly well.
  • Moondoggy09 - 03/25/2009
  • okay like the premise but there are a number of flaws
    wind seems to be picking up the hair bu not the clothes
    the waist is way to thin
    her right hand is backwards
    and katanas arent straight they have a curve to make the slashing motion more comfertable
    I hope you take these comments as what they are meant for constructive criticisim designed to help you improve your next drawing 3/5
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